psychicpebbles's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anti-Christmas]

nice wan

nice story and everything, animation was fine. just improve a bit on the lip synch,

other than that i want to lick ur willy.

[Santa Saw Trap]

i fucking love this

i've never laughed so hard at a flash cartoon before.

have you considered voice acting professionally?

you are better than egoraptor.

[Zanta Claws III]

4.58 / 5.00 (+ 0.0015)

Holy shit I actually affected the score.

Anyways, now onto the massive amazing sexifying review full of explosions.

The writing was hysterical, and once again I found myself laughing at loud. Although I only laughed aloud a few times, I was grinning the entire time. I really enjoyed the twist of Tom being the bad guy for once and Zanta having to team up with Edd and Matt to defeat Tom. The comedy and writing felt fresh and never got repetitive, there was always something to grab my attention.

The artwork itself was beautiful yet very simple. Simple design is good if used properly, and I must say, you've nailed it quite well. The backgrounds and special effects were also wonderful. I really do admire how you pulled off explosions, fire, etc, because it's some of the hardest things to animate.

Animation wise, it was very good. You've improved a lot in the last few years especially on the animation aspect. I really love how you've managed to make the characters always doing something interesting or moving. The shaky effect is also pleasant, along with jaw movements whilst they're talking. You may have been doing that for a while, but I just now picked it up. I also liked the bits of frame by frame like during Tom's montage and Zanta burying himself.

The voices were also spectacular although you've never really had an issue with them. I really enjoyed the song which I think is a first for Eddsworld. I'm not sure and feel free to correct me. You pulled that off quite nicely. Props to Joshua for being so into character and hilarious.

I think that about covers it in my shitty review. Anyways, in short, nice job man. You've improved a lot and I like where Eddsworld is turning now.

keep it up eddy-pies :3

eddsworld responds:

Yay big review! I'm really glad you liked it!

[Tootsie Roll Dysfunction]

You Can Do Better

I'm going to be completely honest with you.

I know you didn't animate it, so this is basically two reviews. One for sh0t-d0wN and one for you.

As per sh0t, you did an excellent job. The animation and facial expression were completely on par and expressed the characters very nicely. There weren't really any backgrounds, which was okay because you were basing this off of the commercial which didn't have any backgrounds. The characters looked very similar to their commercial counterpart and the lip snych was wonderful.

Good as always.

Now, this part is for you Nick. I really hate to be so brutally honest, but I felt I should leave a review so you could stop next time and honestly think about it before you record or submit it. I understand the joke, and have actually had ideas of my own to do a parody of this commercial. I also understand the joke here, but I'm being honest, I didn't laugh one time. I didn't even crack a smile. I was sitting there waiting. The only times I did grin or enjoy it was due to the animation done by sh0t.

The writing dragged on, and there wasn't really a punch-line. A punch-line is a quick one liner or basically what the cartoon is building up to. It often times ends the joke, or in this case the movie. The only mild "punch-line" i could find was the owl slitting his throat at the end. It was not climactic at ALL. Just completely random penis and vomit jokes. I mean if you would have cut off with the kid interupting the owl masturbating THAT would have been better. It dragged on and I was waiting for something interesting to happen.

I wouldn't mind it dragging on if it wasn't so repetitive. That was the worst part about it. The jokes were literally repeating over and over. I felt like I watched the same movie about 10 times. The turtle throws up and is a pedophile. The owl screams and cusses. We get the idea. I understand what you said before about you only cussing "for the owls character", but that can't be your scape goat. It was plain bad script writing. Especially screaming. If you're going to do a screaming scene, at least go straight from complete calmness to absolute chaos and screaming. Don't keep shouting into the mic and cussing, it gets really and and stale after about 15 seconds.

Before you write another long parody or spoof, please, I ask you, don't let it be this receptive. Get straight to the punch line and don't do "build ups" to absolutely nothing. Shock humor didn't work at all in this case. And that's the issue with shock humor - if it fails, it fails extremely horribly. It seems the only jokes were masturbation, pedophilia, and random vomiting. Alone and used correctly these jokes can be somewhat humorous, but shock humor IS NOT meant to be dragged on for 11 minutes.

Please, don't think this review was out of anger or I'm being a prick. Take it as criticism. Your voice acting was good as always, just work on the script writing a little bit. I wish you the best of luck on future projects.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

I really do appreciate the review man, and thanks for the comments. Everyone is entitles to their opinion, and you obviously looked more into the perspective of "This is just cursing and vomiting jokes", as many do. Those who look at it as a psychopathic montage really laugh at the whole idea of it.

The thing is, I wasn't trying to be organized with this. I wanted this to be, for the most part, a CRAZY cartoon with absurd humor and questioning dialogue. It isn't in everyones taste, of course, but I am very proud of what Sh0t-D0wn and I have put together.

The owl screams and curses because... well, he is on the path to insanity because this kid has come ot him CONSTANTLY and bothered him. The turtle throws up because he has mongolian erectile dysfunction. The movie "drags on" because I wanted to give the world a bit more depth, showing what the characters have to go through. I don't consider it "repetitive", I only consider it "perspective".

Thanks for the compliments on my voice acting and on Sh0t-D0wns amazing artistic talents. As for this being "shock humor" it was never intended as being one, but as being an in depth dark comedy cartoon.

[Howto make great comments]

Good

Really good job. Not your best work, but more than decent.

The animation was smooth and pleasing, backgrounds were nice and tidy, sound quality was ace, and the humor and plot had its ups and downs. The only complains The only issue I have with the animation is the lip synching. I know its hard but it adds a lot more to the cartoon to synch every single word. I know it's a short movie and I understand you just made this for fun, nothing serious.

You could also have built on the other commenting annoyances, such as "Better than Justin Beiber!" , "Fake and Gay", Chuck Norris jokes, "Thumbs up if _____", etc and so on. Like I said, swell animation over all.

also pretty firm applearm you got there, why dontcha call me sometime ;D

LazyMuffin responds:

THANKS.
I guess I sort of didn't notice the lip syncing, cause usually I don't get comments on that.

[Cute Explosion]

Nice Job Sexy

Your cartoons get better every time I watch them. The animation is extremely smooth, as long as the lines. It's what I love about your animation. You keep proportion, smooth, thin lines, shade, and it looks great.

The song was hilarious to animate, I'm glad you did. The only thing that looked slightly rough was the rainbows behind the Awesome Face guys. Other than that my other complaint was usage of memes. It takes away from the comedy a tiny bit. Not enough (by any means) to make it bad, it is just an easy way to get a laugh. I know you don't need to because your stuff is always funny.

Just try to avoid them. Like I said, no flaws.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

[Circle n' Square 2]

Jesus Tits Papa

Fuck me like a dog.

[Why Terry is Gay]

ew!!

this was good animated picture slides n all but ur som kinda sicko XD

[Leo & Satan III]

Awesome

The artwork is seriously beautiful. Especially the backgrounds, great choice to do them in Photoshop man. They were smooth and looked professional, very much worth it to switch from the ones you had previously in flash.

I also noticed you redid some of the theme song. Notably, the backgrounds and the statues arm, which was very interesting, looked great.

The animation was seriously astounding. You completely nailed every single angle and movement you needed to. The scenes that stood out for me was the scene where Satan ran out to grab the trash, when he busted through the wall, and when Leo's legs were flailing in the air. Like I said, you know how to get every scene to look fucking perfect. Your animation has improved significantly.

The audio was magnificent. Hans part was hysterical as Mrs. Bovakov, and you and Sean did an astounding job with Leo and Satan. You could feel the emotion when you listened to it. The sadness in Satans voice, the fear in Leo's. While I'm on the subject of audio, I should bring up that Leo and Satan has the best sound track I think on any Newgrounds/Internet series. I'm not just saying that. The theme song is really epic (Props to Harry and Colm) and the "Lil' Buddy" music was heartbreaking. I loved the faint "Satans Playtime" playing.

The writing was clearly brilliant, and I personally love the choice you made to make this scary and sad, along with your usual funny. As Walt Disney said; "For every laugh, there should be a tear." You did just that, my friend.

In my reviews, I always leave a section for criticism. In all honesty, I can't look at this and see anything I could or would ever change.

I have heard and seen this movie 100,000 different times, different versions of it. I can recite the entire movie at this point, but I still feel the "magic" you've put into this. It is something every flash animator should have, and unfortunately few do. This is going to be a classic on Newgrounds. Leo and Satan has had one of the best series on Newgrounds. Also, one of the most memorable.

Bravo Chris, Bravo. My penis is officially erect.

Oney responds:

who r u

[Halloween Special 2010]

The Best Movie Ever Made Ever

By far this is the best movie ever made.

The character design is brilliant. No ears or nose, and not even eyeballs. Just little green circles. The shading was phenomenal, because you were original. Most people think, "Hey, I'm going to make shadows that make sense!" You were original, which I deeply admire. You completely schooled those people who used "human anatomy" and "light sources".

My favorite part, by far, was the voice acting. They made the story that much more interesting. For a second I thought it was George Clooney talking. I thought "How did itsChrisLife get George Clooney?" Then I realized it was your friends. Seriously, bravo. Tell them nice job. Best voice acting not only on Newgrounds, but the internet. Perhaps in the history of EVER.

The story line was complex and amazing. I sat down and thought I would watch a flash animation. This was something more. It was like watching every amazing movie I've ever seen at once. It was an orgasm to the eyes.

This is a pivotal point not only for Newgrounds, but for mankind.
Bravo, itsChrisLife. Bravo.

itsChrisLife responds:

at least u didnt give me a '0'... thx i guess...